ATH-GAR-NEL
Even as Ath-gar-nel grew up, some elders continued to insist that to
fight more than one foe was unholy, akin to the evil deeds that had
brought about the fall of the
Nezgeth empire. This thinking had stamped
itself firmly in the proud Warrior’s traditional mind. Ath-gar-nel himself remembered an especially violent campaign that had
been the glory of the Nezgeth tribe during his sixteenth year. A rival
tribe to the south had challenged the Nezgeth oasis rights, one of the
more ambitious enemy warriors moving to strengthen his stranglehold on
the region. For many months the battle waged on, interrupted more than
once by an obscure Nezgeth religious tradition.
As Nezgeth Warrior, Ath-garl-nel and he alone had the knowledge of the
list of past Warriors, a list that started with that strange and
difficult man who had fought for the tribe just eleven years ago, and
ended with mysterious names of Warriors from long ago, from a time
before the exile itself.
Oracle of 392 GUE placed the fallen
Implementor Belegur at the heart of a deadly plague that shook
the kingdom of
Quendor. Coupled with famine, this was a deadly time.
Mareilon groaned under the agony of food riots. The mayor gave a direct
order to the city guards to curb the riots, only to find out later that
they helped to instigate them. Even though the handful of remaining
magicians of Quendor fused their powers together to defeat the plague
and pestilence, the resulting tension between the mayor and the guards
never successfully healed, and lasted even into the conflicts of 398
GUE. Although the
Great Famine in Quendor had been confidently dealt with by
Zylon the Aged, those outside the kingdom, in the
Kovalli Desert
suffered greatly. This unceasing famine would plague those barren lands
for over six years. Throughout the course of languishing under the
torture of the drought, the Nezgeth tribe was under the superstition
that their
gods had turned away from them, abandoning them to this
famine.
The sunrise of the same day in 398 in which the
Sacred Scrolls of Fizbin were discovered
missing from the
Galepath University library marked the end of the suffering of the Nezgeth tribe at the
hands of the famine. For six years the holy priests had counted the
sunrises, hoping and praying that they would survive to see the start
of the seventh year. They believed a disaster of that duration could
only have meant that the approval of the gods was no longer with them.
It is part of the Nezgeth tradition that the gods cannot forsake the
tribe without granting one final gift of wisdom. To receive this wisdom
is the purpose of the
Brith-nel-fhet. This special ceremony, one of
most powerful rites of the Nezgeth religion, was enacted to invoke the
gods. For many years the occasion had never arose to enact it, but this
was that time. For weeks the priests had to ready themselves to enter into direction
communication with their gods. Three of the tribe’s highest priests
entered a holy shelter, a dark cavern hollowed out of the sacred rock
that marked the western boundary of the Nezgeth territory. With them
prayed Ath-gar-nel, Warrior of the Nezgeth. He alone as the tribal
chieftain had the power to act on the words of the gods. Though he had
his own superstitious doubts about the reliability of the ceremony, he
partook of it regardless. Thus the Brith-nel-fhet was enacted and
completed, ending in the drinking of a potion that sent the four into a
wave of unconsciousness.
When they awoke, new carvings graced the wall of the western side of
the chamber. Where the previous engravings had ended on the left stood
the newest symbol. It was a round pulsating object, clearly showing
what they believed to be the pseudo-god
Savitri’s punishment upon the
Nezgeth tribe. Then six notches in the wall represented the years of
suffering, followed by the symbol for the Brith-nel-fhet ceremony
itself. Further to the right stood a tall, fierce man, wearing the
robes of the Warrior and facing his numerous opponents fearlessly,
determined to vanquish them all. Then came many symbols, all crowded
together in a very short span of wall. Voyage, mountains, war, death,
another great Warrior, the symbol for magic, and once, then again, then
finally three times repeated, the compass rose with the eastern aim
firmly grasping the spear of justice and retribution.
The pleased Ath-gar-nel was convinced that he understood the clear
meaning of the symbols. No longer would the Warrior lead his peoples to
the south for petty water squabbles with vicious natives. A new course
had been decreed, toward victory, to the east. The Nezgeth prepared to
redeem themselves, believing that the answer of penance lay in combat
and the smiting of many cities and people.
His years as the highest Nezgeth Warrior had been riddled with
suffering and rebellion, and now he embarked on a religious experience
that could in the end prove to be absolutely fruitless. Even those who
did claim to remember the last such Brith-nel-fhet clearly had no idea
about the outcome of that last distant ceremony.
The ignorant tribe did not realize that it had not been
Eru, nor any of
the recognized pseudo-gods that had answered the Nezgeth—they had been
deceitfully lured into Belegur’s plot.
The Devil had witnessed the
entire ceremony, coming across it by chance as he had cast his mind out
throughout the world in search of whatever might be useful to his
machinations. Determined to use the entire Nezgeth tribe to cause much
suffering upon innocents and to distract the nation of Quendor, he had
carved those symbols into the wall.
After the Brith-nel-fhet had uprooted the entire tribe and sent them
marching to the east, the tribe made quick time covering the vicious
Kovalli Desert and arriving at the western edges of the
Mithicus
Mountains. The long march to the mountains themselves had been
surprisingly uneventful. As if aware of the peculiar destiny awaiting
the Nezgeth, other Kovalli tribes had kept their distance, uneager to
start a confrontation with such a powerfully obsessed leader as
Ath-gar-nel.
Er would be the first sacrifice to end the deadly six-year
famine.
Over 300 families of Nezgeth gathered on the ridge. Ath-gar-nel was
annoyed at the word of the weak Erfolk. He had hoped for a series of
noble and glorious battles, the kind in which many of his strongest and
closest friends would perish so that the gods would bring prosperity to
the Nezgeth once again. Ath-gar-nel demanded minimum violence against
the village, which in Nezgeth terms, still implied bringing a new
standard of bloodshed to the Erfolk. As there was no need to risk the
tribe’s young blood in a confrontation as insignificant as this, the
oldest males charged down the mountain first.
For the first time since the fall of
Pheebor, the proud people of Er
prepared for battle. But the brief moments were not enough. It would
have taken an eternity for the people of that tiny village to ready
themselves against the Kovalli hordes, for a dozen of the dark-skinned
warriors were easily a match for the entire population of Er. The
animals were the first to die. The children were ignored. The women
were subjected to the most brutal forms of Nezgeth sexual wrath. And
after the first wave of Kovalli invaders made short work of what little
resistance was to be found, the rest of the tribe descended in a giant
predatorial cloud onto the village. The Er provisions were raided and
completely devoured. A dozen different campsites sprung up in the
immediate valley area.
Of the Erfolk, a family managed to escape in a copse south of the
village, and a young teenage girl managed to hide in an attic. Er still
lived, but an Er only a twisted and misshapen caricature of its proud
former self. The grandfathers were gone, beaten to death, leaving no
one behind to tell the ancient and glorious, albeit quite distorted
tales of Er’s firm stand against the eastern fops from
Borphee. In the
years to come, the Er storytellers would never seem to be particularly
truthful or precise about the details of the day. While Quendoran
history as a whole would speak of a devastating series of battles that
saw a Kovalli tribe called the Nezgeth come to dominate the entire
countryside, Er natives subscribed to their own peculiar rendition of
the events.
The Nezgeth continued eastward to hunt and pillage, burn and destroy
until the gods spoke again, revealing that penance had been done. Three
days later, the Nezgeth horde fell upon the river city of
Foo. Rumors
from the outlying villages had come just a few hours before the
invaders themselves, giving enough time to call to arms. In some sense,
Foo could have been considered lucky that it had a chance to mount such
a defense. Given the final results of the battle, that kind of luck had
not done much good for the city, and the end had come, perhaps later
than it would have, but inevitably all the same.
For a few tense hours the inhabitants of Foo were able to mount an
organized defense. The local hunting clubs and shipping hands banded
together to block off certain key streets, hoping against hoped to hold
off the heavily armed invaders. Even the children of Foo showed a
fierceness unfamiliar to the Nezgeth, except possibly from their own
young. Gangs of alley-lurking Foo teenagers, too stupid to run in fear
at the sight of painted warrior faces and gleaming stained spears,
actually proved an annoyance to the distracted Nezgeth fighters. They
were soon dispatched, however, and eventually the shear bulk of the
Kovalli numbers proved to be too oppressive for the makeshift platoons
of streetfighters. The Foo boulevards filled with the tall, dark
invaders from the west, running every which way, shouting their eerie,
mysterious battle cries.
Its entire population certainly outnumbered the hostile newcomers, but
the complacent city-dwellers provided no fair match for the Nezgeth,
long hardened by years of vicious sun and unforgiving tribal warfare.
They sacked the seat of local government, and wrecked the provincial
temple, the most expansive and beautiful of its kind within 200 bloits.
In the wide city streets, familiar taverns burned to the ground. This
city was no Er, and the Nezgeth were pleased, even challenged by the
striking differences in this, their second battle.
In the final tally, Foo had lost many surprised, defenseless
inhabitants, normal people who had just that morning been feeling
normal feelings, thinking normal thoughts. Boredom with life,
satisfaction in a caring marriage, ambition for a successful promotion,
all of these things and more found themselves suddenly cut short by the
unexpected Nezgeth visit.
When the Nezgeth tribe neared the river itself, its effect on the
desert people was profound. None had ever seen a well or desert oasis
deeper than knee height before. The thought of a powerfully immense
flow of water that could swallow the entire tribe without a trace was
frightful. Some of the more religiously inclined Nezgeth immediately
concluded that a new god was at work here, a god wholly unknown in the
desert lands. The rest of the tribe simply backed away from the flowing
water in fright, vowing never to even get near, much less cross,
something so completely foreign.
This fact did not go unnoticed by Ath-gar-nel, who had remained aloof
from the fighting. As the day progressed he became aware of an odd
desire to ensure that his blade remained unbloodied. Wandering the
strange streets before him, he peered intently at the new sights,
wondering at the magnificent people that had built such foreign works
of beauty. He loathed the thought of killing these people.
The conquest did not halt with Foo.
Bilbug and
Termum followed the
first two; all reeled from the unexpected and senseless invasion. The
final region they would come to was the
Jerrimore Plains. Here they
inavertently came upon the armies of Galepath and those of Mareilon who
were engaged in battle. The weapons and armor of these two nations were
no match for the viciously barbed spears sported by the Kovalli
natives. One by one, both armies were devoured.
In the meantime, having heard of the conflict between
Galepath and
Mareilon, the Quendoran army, under the command of
General Griffspotter
(who was accompanied by
Zilbo Throckrod and
Litbo Mumblehum) reached
the Jerrimore Plains. They found that not even one dozen of the
Mareilon
force still lived in the valley, but the ground was fresh with
bodies of many times that number. The civil war had already come and
gone, the royal army merely late entries in a finished game.
Standing victorious over the entire battlefield were the Kovalli
natives. The Nezgeth banded together on the field below, awaiting the
inevitable charge from the Quendoran soldiers. The royal force was to
be split in half, one hundred men waiting on the highest point of the
ridge, to advance only if the first attack proved a failure. Zilbo
reluctantly agreed to head the reserve force, allowing himself the
fleeting hope that a victorious Griffspotter would save Zilbo from
leading his men into battle. Griffspotter began the cautious march down
the ridge to the Jerrimore Estates.
So that the men of the Quendoran royal army might arrive in the valley
all at once, the order had been given to disperse the marching columns
and have the soldiers proceed down the hill abreast of each other, a
long thin line stretched across the horizon. In the middle of the line
and just slightly ahead of the rest strode the general, accompanied on
either side by one of the force’s several trumpeters and the Largoneth
standard bearer. As the approaching force arrived at the base of the
hill, the watching Nezgeth warriors silently arranged themselves in a
similar formation, a parallel line just as long but several times as
deep making its way across the scarred meadow.
Griffspotter’s army drew close. The two lines stared at each other over
an ever-lessening distance, neither enemy leader quite willing to give
the order to charge. Neither leaders saw the lone Nezgeth warrior ready
his bow, the arrow piercing the general’s chest and killing him. The
Nezgeth chieftain whirled in anger, seeking out the lone archer. At
the sight of the arrow hurtling toward the general, several of the
Kovalli tribe had edged into motion, ready to run at the enemy at the
sound of the order. Looking at their leader in surprise, it soon became
apparent that no order would be given.
From atop the ridge, a single trumpet blast called out to the Quendoran
army. Zilbo commanded for them to retreat up to the ridge. The only
hope now lay in regrouping and hoping to last long enough to greet the
arrival of the reinforcing units from the far north. The soldiers of
Largoneth in the field below heard the lonely sound of the trumpet but
sound not answer its call. Across the small gap that separated the two armies, Ath-gar-nel began
spitting out orders at a furious pace. Again and again, several
clusters of the Kovalli tribe broke loose and headed towards the royal
army. Each time the Warrior held them back. For he knew that to fight
again on that day would be unholy, a blasphemy against the gods, to try
their patience. Soon the entire Nezgeth force waited peacefully.
The royal army, smaller now by one, reassembled on the ridge according
to Zilbo’s order. With the death of Griffspotter, Zilbo had been thrust
into command of the Quendoran royal army. Ath-gar-nel walked just
within earshot of Zilbo and his company, crying out in a tongue foreign
to them, all save Litbo (he had studied a variant of their dialect many
years ago). When Litbo conversed with the Nezgeth leader in his own
tongue, Ath-gar-nel assumed them to be “The Fathers from the East.”
Using Mumblehum as a willing intermediary, Zilbo managed to convince
the Nezgeth Warrior to abandon his worship and join in conversation.
Convinced he stood in the presence of the physical incarnation of
generations of tribal legend, the Ath-gar-nel introduced himself
haltingly and begged forgiveness for the ignorant attacks against the
sacred Fathers from the East. Zilbo was more than willing to oblige.
While the leaders of both armies consulted, the royal army and the
Kovalli tribesmen worked together at the task of gravedigging. The work
had been going on for some time and now the Estates were gradually
being restored to their former state. At first the Nezgeth had been
hesitant to help in the work, almost none of their dead being counted
in the number. However, Ath-gar-nel had insisted; they had slain the
holy men from the east, and to dig their graves would be only fitting
recompense for the misdeed. During the process, the Nezgeth captured
Endeth.
Ancient prophecies told the Nezgeth that their goal lay deep
underground, in caverns near the coast. Litbo realized that these
Nezgeth were the ones who had been spoken in the Scrolls of Kar’nai and
that Belegur could not be defeated without the help of a ‘desert
tribe.’ He also realized that this prophecy describing Belegur’s lair
as “a deep underground cavern where a river spills to the sea” matched
with what the Nezgeth spoke about the cavern. Allied with the Quendoran forces, the Nezgeth marched for the lair.
The Lingolf garrison remained behind to guard the tunnel’s entrance
while the Nezgeth followed Zilbo Throckrod and Litbo Mumblehum into the
tunnel in search of what lay within. Deep and deeper they went, into
the inky blackness of
Belegur’s tunnels. They came to junction after
junction, and each stretch of passageway was filled with side corridors
and nearby rooms, as the explorers entered a more and more complex,
self-contained universe. Eventually they spilled into a mammoth cavern
filled with the same blue glow as the column. Amid the chaos of the
underground, was scattered reading material and piles of fading scrolls
and massive tomes, as well as an ornamental knife. And at the center
was Belegur.
Litbo, keeping safely behind Belegur’s range of vision crossed to the
middle of the chamber in an attempt to recover the Scrolls of Fizbin,
but the fallen Implementor was not blinded by his advance. But at that
distraction, Ath-gar-nel and the entire Nezgeth tribe struck in unison
at Belegur. This further distraction broke his spell. Now locked in
combat against the Nezgeth—one dark magician against an entire
tribe—Litbo grabbed the Scrolls of Fizbin along with the other two
missing manuscripts.
Though Belegur was able to hold them off alone, his efforts were
divided. The blue column began to grow weak, flickering shakily with
each further release of energy. In the process, not only was the
Implementor successful at slaying Ath-gar-nel with a fabricated bloody
axe, but Endeth was able to sneak up behind Belegur with the
sacrificial knife in hand. Bringing it down, the single stab destroyed
the current mortal vessel used by Belegur. With him, the crackling
pillar of light shattered, and a shower of blue fireworks tumbled to
the cavern floor. The gateway to the
Timeless Halls had closed and
vanished.
When the victors emerged from the
Griffspotter Caverns, the Nezgeth
believed that through the death of Ath-gar-nel, they had paid their
penance. After choosing a new leader, the Kovalli tribesmen thanked the
Quendorans, and returned to the lands of the desert sun.
TRIVIA:
One of the cubes of foundation was in the hands of Ath-gar-nel
in 398 GUE, which, included with a fragment of
Grueslayer, was used in
the Brith-nel-fhet ritual.
SOURCE(S): Zylon the Aged, fragment from The Zork Chronicles |