Hi again,
Just posting this to tell everyone that I've finished the Prologue to "Zork - The Coming of the Storm". Its up at www.gue.shorturl.com if you want to check it out. Post back and tell me what you think!
-GF
Zork - The Coming of the Storm
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Re: Zork - The Coming of the Storm
Me again, CHAPTER ONE is now up. If you do read this anyone, PLEASE, PLEASE give me some feedback, I'd really value your opinions!
-GF
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Re: Zork - The Coming of the Storm
I put your story on my Palm Pilot and read it in bed.
I was quite impressed with your writing skills. The story seems to have a pretty dark mood, like Nemesis did.
I'm always a little conflicted on that point because I usually expect a little humor in Zork games or stories. But on the other hand, it's nice to have a kind of dark, more dramatic Zork story once in a while.
I was quite impressed with your writing skills. The story seems to have a pretty dark mood, like Nemesis did.
I'm always a little conflicted on that point because I usually expect a little humor in Zork games or stories. But on the other hand, it's nice to have a kind of dark, more dramatic Zork story once in a while.
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Re: Zork - The Coming of the Storm
I totally agree with you DrPaul, there should definietly be humour in Zork - to me, thats half of the appeal. I'm right now considering two ideas - Â either keeping the mood the way it is for THIS story and writing a comedy later, or trying to wedge in some comedy for this one. On the other hand, The Coming of the Storm certainely isn't going to be as dark as Nemesis - think RTZ if anything.
Thanks for the comments, they help me to make it a good read for everyone!
-GF
Thanks for the comments, they help me to make it a good read for everyone!
-GF
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Re: Zork - The Coming of the Storm
Hey, good writing.
You're 15? Argh, I feel old...old...lol. Seriously, good fic.
You're 15? Argh, I feel old...old...lol. Seriously, good fic.
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Re: Zork - The Coming of the Storm
Thanks for the complements Fantine!
-GF
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